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My lord
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Created on 12-7-07
Verse 1.
My lord are you with me
Can you hear me
Are you there.
Lord if you are there,
Listen to me.
Hear my prayer.
Chorus:
Life has brought me thin,
And the light
Is growning dime.
I know not what I do,
Not what to think,
Just to love him.
Verse 2.
You've seen how I try,
You've seen how I cry,
When will things go right.
The pain won't stop,
My heart is in rot.
Hear my pryaer tonight.
Chorus.
Life has brought me thin,
And the light
Is growing dim.
I know not what I do,
Not what to think.
Just I love him.
Please Login to post comments| On March 9th 2008 professormcgee Said : | |
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awww that was a sweet poem ^_^, im not really religious but i did love it. who is it about? |
| On January 5th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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This is really heartfelt and great. I agree I would love to hear it. |
| On December 10th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Oooo i love it!! as Ansjo sead, would love to hear it in song. |
| On December 9th 2007 barbaraew Said : | |
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great job |
| On December 8th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Ooo I'd love to know what the melody sounds like. |
| On December 7th 2007 jjsmomm682006 Said : | |
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yeah, it may be corky but hey what can i say. |
