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I was really pissed at workRate this Poem
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Death |
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Faith |
Angered Confusion
I"m angry and confused,
All at the same time.
Millions of thoughts,
Running through my mind.
Is it really worth it,
Do you really care?
Like a Brick it hits me.
Why I am actually here.
Though treatment isn't fair,
To say the least its unjust.
Anywhere else is a dream,
Staying here is a must.
I've given every opportunity,
To make things very fair.
I've softened my "LOUD" voice,
I've become very much aware.
But Fair and Just is a dream,
That only the "Stupid" keep.
If unfair is the way to be.
Then "Stupid" I will be.
| On December 12th 2007 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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I used to know the feeling at my old job and now I work in heaven. Busy but really nice.Very well captured. Time to start looking for brighter horizons? |
| On December 11th 2007 AMC500 Said : | |
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awesome poem Heather. Love it! |
| On December 8th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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The feeling of injustice is a bitter pill to swallow. Nicely written. |
| On December 7th 2007 kellyjob Said : | |
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Good Job! I especially like the list couple of lines! The flow was also nice! |
| On December 7th 2007 suette827 Said : | |
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i like this one. |
| On December 7th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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WOW that was really truly amazing!!! loved it not just some but all. |
| On December 7th 2007 jjsmomm682006 Said : | |
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Let me know your thoughts. |


