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It is not a Dream
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Created on 11-17-07
A very tragic accident happened to me,
I keep telling myself, "Its only a dream."
Yet when I pinch myself I do not awake.
For it is pain that I intake.
My family has been hurt extremely bad,
It hurts me so to see them sad.
Even though justic is what we seek,
It won't awaken them from their eternal sleep.
In God's hand we leave their soul,
I'll see them again in Heaven I know.
Although a nightmare it may seem,
Its hard to believe, it is not a dream.
Please Login to post comments| On November 19th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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the loss of some one you love is never easy, beautifuly written |
| On November 19th 2007 AMC500 Said : | |
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Sorry it took a bit for me to check this one out. Its very deep and filled with sorrow. And that makes it beautiful |
| On November 18th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Very sad. So sorry you had to lose people you love. |
| On November 18th 2007 kellyjob Said : | |
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Wow! Very sad, I think I actually started to cry. Seriously! Good job! |
| On November 18th 2007 barbaraew Said : | |
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great writting , so sad , sorry for your loss |
| On November 17th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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This is an amazing poem! So emotional and tragic! |
| On November 17th 2007 deshanna13 Said : | |
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this is very sad sorry about yo cousin and the ex =[ |
| On November 17th 2007 jjsmomm682006 Said : | |
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I wrote this the day after my Cousin and ex were murdered in 2003, please let me know what you think. |
