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A Lover's Dance

Views (67) Love Created on 11-16-07 Flag
One love looks
Into another lover's eyes
They see a floor
to dance thru the nite.

One love looks
Into another lover's heart.
And longs for the rhythem
To not be torn apart.

One Love looks
Into another lover's soul
Looking into dreams
To know what they know.

One lover listen's
To the rhythem of their heart.
Seeing if it matches
The beat the other starts.

One lover feels
their body start to move
Wondering about
and watching the other groove.

One lover learns
The truth about the cries.
Why the other loves
Then runs away and hides.

Two lovers share,
A song so very true,
A floor so very Strong,
A dance, Till night is thru.

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On December 12th 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord OOO nicely done!! i could feel myself gliding through my Mrs soul on "the dance floor" beautifully written!!!
On November 16th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo Very nice. Really liked the comparison between love and music/dance. excellent.
On November 16th 2007 hpriestess Said :
hpriestess Wow. I think I like this one best so far
On November 16th 2007 jjsmomm682006 Said :
jjsmomm682006 let me know what you think.