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To wierd to describe.Rate this Poem
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Losing You |
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Death |
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Journey's |
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Whats there to say anymore. |
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My Heart is Like Glass |
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Our Troops |
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Superman |
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Angry Heart |
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Missing You |
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Where are You? |
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emptiness |
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What Did I Do |
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Family |
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Angels |
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Faith |
Faith
When I walk
I'm Not alone,
For satan walks beside me.
He try to trick
and trys to taunt,
but I keep walking my way.
His harsh words
and scornful glares,
Stings just like an arrow.
But I keep strong
keep moving on,
Along the straight and Narrow.
He tugs and pulls
my heart apart,
until I feel it breaking.
But I keep walking,
While he is talking,
My faith I still am Keeping.
The light is warm
The voice is soft,
As god's arms I am reaching.
The choir sings,
The bells they ring,
and Angels they are speaking.
"You've fought your way
Every single day,
While satan wanted you.
But we have won,
Because you stayed strong,
And kept your faith in you."
So in the gates
I met my fate,
and dropped to my knees in prayer.
With tear filled eyes,
to my surprise,
My whole family standing there.
As I looked down,
and see the frowns,
I asked him Send me home.
With a look so firm,
Without a squirm,
I said, Im not yet done.
The world still needs me,
not yet to grieve me,
They need my songs of love.
My tasks not done yet,
I can not forget,
To raise my prescious son.
So in an flash,
the thundercrashed,
I awoke back in my bed.
I thanked him dearly,
and prayed sincerely,
And kissed my sons sweet head.
Now here I write,
with my heart tonight,
When time gets to rough,
Just think of this
my heavenly trip
and remember, faith is enough.
| On November 7th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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REally cool. But now I have the Gearge Michael song 'Faith' stuck in my head! haha. |
| On November 6th 2007 LQQKatME6 Said : | |
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I too am not religious but it was stiking and powerful to me |
| On November 6th 2007 LQQKatME6 Said : | |
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Oh I loved it! Really! |
| On November 6th 2007 hpriestess Said : | |
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I walk a different path and do not believe in satan. However, having a good understanding of the Christian religion, it is a wonderful poem. I am happy for you that you have your faith |
| On November 5th 2007 yorkiedude27 Said : | |
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wow i really love this poem your best for sure yet |
| On November 5th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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I'm not religious, but this is really well written! |
| On November 5th 2007 l1ck1ty Said : | |
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you are awesome |
| On November 5th 2007 barbaraew Said : | |
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awesome job |
| On November 5th 2007 FamousOne777 Said : | |
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Prverbs 3: 5+6 Trust in the lord with all your heart and lean not on your own understandings but in all your ways acknowledge him and he will make your paths straight. |
| On November 5th 2007 countryfreak13 Said : | |
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Ooah! This is neat! This would make a pretty cool song! :D I'm lovin it! |
| On November 5th 2007 emily28793 Said : | |
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luv it |
| On November 5th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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keeping in mind that i am not a christian, I love this, it flows and keeps you reading, well done really, really like this one, well done! |
| On November 5th 2007 AMC500 Said : | |
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awesome poem, very captivating |
| On November 5th 2007 kellyjob Said : | |
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I'm not very religious, but this was relly good! Makes you think. I like it! |
| On November 4th 2007 jjsmomm682006 Said : | |
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let me know your thoughts.
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