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im alone, with no one to love

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emptiness

Views (241) Pain Created on 11-2-07 Flag

Empty heart, on the floor.

nothings there, where it was before.

 No one to love, or love for me.

Nothings where,it used to be.

Death won't come, to soon for me.

It says live, for whom, not me.

No one to hold, or kiss goodbye.

To hear me laugh, or hear me cry.

An empty heart, lying on the floor.

Nothings there, like there was before.

Tears fall, out of big brown eyes.

Turning green, as turquoise skies.

But tears they fall, unto pillows soft.

Until wiped away, in a covered cough.

Empty heart, lying on the floor.

Nothing there, like there was before.

breath is shallowed, for crying hard.

looking up, into heavens stars.

But no one hears my heartfelt prayers.

so now im left, cold, and scared.

An empty heart, lying on the floor.

Nothings there, where there was before.

 

 

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On November 23rd 2007 JessicaKasza Said :
JessicaKasza I truly loved it.
On November 4th 2007 barbaraew Said :
barbaraew great writting
On November 4th 2007 nwirotod Said :
nwirotod Nice work!!!
On November 2nd 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic Loved the rhythm! Nice work!
On November 2nd 2007 lolahmv Said :
my picture
lovely...
On November 2nd 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo Really good! Loved it.
On November 2nd 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord second read and loving it more!
On November 2nd 2007 FamousOne777 Said :
FamousOne777 Excellent work
On November 2nd 2007 countryfreak13 Said :
countryfreak13 Awesome job...I'm lovin it!! :D
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On November 2nd 2007 LQQKatME6 Said :
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On November 2nd 2007 AMC500 Said :
AMC500 Brilliant, the sorrow and pain hits home
On November 2nd 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord nice very nice. keep at it.
On November 2nd 2007 jjsmomm682006 Said :
jjsmomm682006 hey there, you know the drill, let me know what you think. And rate. I appreciate everything.