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I was heartbroken.Rate this Poem
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Where are You?
Here I sit in silent Prayer.
Wandering if you are really there.
Do you listen as I call
My tears flowing, back to the wall.
Hearts broken, on the floor.
Wishing I was here no more.
As i sit alone I cry,
and silently keep asking why?
Why do I fall so easily in love,
Why must I hurt, or fear above.
Frightened to be so much alone.
No where to go, not even home.
I thought I did what i was told.
Let him in, dont be cold.
Now I sit here with tear felt eyes.
Wishing I knew, why oh why.
Wandering if you are really there.
Do you listen as I call
My tears flowing, back to the wall.
Hearts broken, on the floor.
Wishing I was here no more.
As i sit alone I cry,
and silently keep asking why?
Why do I fall so easily in love,
Why must I hurt, or fear above.
Frightened to be so much alone.
No where to go, not even home.
I thought I did what i was told.
Let him in, dont be cold.
Now I sit here with tear felt eyes.
Wishing I knew, why oh why.
| On November 4th 2007 barbaraew Said : | |
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great job |
| On November 1st 2007 becauseimloved Said : | |
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i love this poem.... |
| On November 1st 2007 TresMechas Said : | |
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Sound like it really comes from the heart :)
~*Nina*~ |
| On November 1st 2007 sabrina225 Said : | |
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WOW....AMAZEN...I THINK THE SAME THINGS AND DO ALOT OF THOSE THINGS...WHOM I KIDDEN THIS POEM IS PART OF ME...THE FEELING THE EMOTION....BUT YOU KNO YOUR NOT ALONE...KEEP IT UP |
| On November 1st 2007 yorkiedude27 Said : | |
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wow i really like this poem its extrmely good you are really talented |
| On November 1st 2007 alienz13 Said : | |
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It is a really great poem! I like it because to me it could me one of a couple things, i love it! Keep it up |
| On November 1st 2007 lilangel9102 Said : | |
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that was an amazing and powerful poem and if it has to do with whats happend in life then u can always count on me cuz i understand how pain feels cuz i just got through a relationship.
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| On November 1st 2007 FamousOne777 Said : | |
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Pain and Love you usually get one with the other. Good Poem, you have talent |
| On November 1st 2007 countryfreak13 Said : | |
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This is wonderful!! Luv it! Keep up your hard work! :P |
| On November 1st 2007 emily28793 Said : | |
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luv the poem |
| On November 1st 2007 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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This is so blatantly honest and from the heart. I feel where you are coming from. You are very passionate in your writing. |
| On November 1st 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Love it!!! i can feel the pain, the lost, the betrail. excelent LOVE IT!! |
| On November 1st 2007 jjsmomm682006 Said : | |
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let me know what you think and please comment and rate. |


