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Created:
04/07 2009
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210
Category:
Love
My Poems
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Vines of Wrath |
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12
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Too Late |
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Creature From the Hole |
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Watching Everything Pass You by |
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He Doesn't See |
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Be Free |
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Leave Me Alone |
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That I'll Come Back |
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Too Young to Die |
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Say you Love Me |
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Fun I'm Having As I Go Insane! |
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The Mario and Luigi Dance Time |
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My Heart Unfolds |
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Because I Knew You |
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Flying Into Darkness |
Beat This Dream
I hear you
Sweet whispers in my ear
Sending shivers down my spine
I'm coming unglued
But yet it doesn't seem right...
What if it's all a dream?
I hope it's not as it seems
Oh save me from this plight
Mind turning,
this never ending feeling.
Heart churning,
always frantically beating.
I want to soar
Not feel the ground under my feet.
But I'm stuck in reality,
never being free.
It's too late for you
Words falling on deaf ears.
Maybe another day,
when my heart finds things true
-jirrith 4/7/09
Please Login to post comments| On April 7th 2009 Lorianne13 Said: |
| it made me think of the story "The Awakening" by Kate Chopin. Nicely done. |
| On April 7th 2009 atavanhalen Said: |
| well I like it... its almost... depressingly beautiful. lol... If that's possible. |
| On April 7th 2009 xxxdldxxx94 Said: |
| i hate it |
| On April 7th 2009 erickagere Said: |
| Good job Jilly billy! |
| On April 7th 2009 bloodwraith1 Said: |
| hm....pretty good |
