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Created on 7-18-07
The world is going fast
As it has in the past
The world goes round and round
But i don't want to be in the ground
How come good people die
As i ask myself why.....
Why do we live if were just going to die
Why? Why? Why?
Is there a meaning to life
or do people think dying is a thrill
As i ask myself these crazy questions
I think, life is for real
life is no joke
we should take life serious
even though it may be furious
or even frustrating
but in the end, you would
know you have done your
time and you have done it well
Please Login to post comments| On August 9th 2007 Hollwood2 Said : | |
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this poem...
thats wassup
i like it |
| On July 21st 2007 lilprincess122 Said : | |
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amazing |
| On July 19th 2007 luvhim4ever12 Said : | |
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awsome u did great |
| On July 19th 2007 luvhim4ever12 Said : | |
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awsome u did great |
| On July 18th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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awwww..this is a wonderful poem..you did a great job..i dont write poems at all..but i can tell which ones are good and bad :D keep up the great work..over time you'll get even better |
| On July 18th 2007 Missy13d69 Said : | |
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Very nice! |
| On July 18th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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Jess, this is a great poem. I know it is your first and if you continue to write, you will only get better. I love you....Mom |
| On July 18th 2007 mrskritter Said : | |
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wonderful work |
