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Unexpected

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unexpected

we met every Friday night
to watch the stars shine bright

but all of that changed
we got in a huge fight one friday morning
we didn't talk to each other

that night i waited for you on the hill
hoping that you would show up
but you didn't

my eyes filled with tears
and i was all alone

a day goes by and we still haven't spoken
i was trying to keep my heart together because it was almost broken

i got a call from your parents
they said your were dead
you were shot by a stray bullet to the head

all of a sudden i just froze
i was speechless
the tears in my eye streamed out

my heart was extremely broken
i never thought that this would have happened
i never got to apologize or say goodbye

i went to your funeral and barely cried
i was a little surprised that you never took off the necklace i got you

your parents gave me a letter
and it had my name on it
it was from you
"the day she died ,she was on her way over to deliver it to me"
her parents said

i didn't open it until later that evening
i came to you grave
i opened it and a picture fell out
it was a picture of you and i

as i read the letter
my heart started to feel a little better
even though i had a smile on my face and laughing
i started crying

as i finished the letter
i looked up
and the stars were out
shining bright...............
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On October 19th 2007 soccachicky24 Said :
soccachicky24 omigosh i love this one soo sad but it is great.keep it up