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just a memory

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sitting with you out here in the  winter air

on the log where we meet up everytime it snowed

we sat there with silence and listen to the flakes drop and watch them fall

 

sitting out on the hill in fall the day after you were gone

i listened to the breeze and i heard your voice

i saw your face the leaves falling down

i realized i was crying

i felt the tears run down my face

and i realized you were gone...............

 

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On September 30th 2007 19dudett92 Said :
19dudett92 it's good, but i feel like it's not done. could you try to make it longer?