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just a memory
sitting with you out here in the winter air
on the log where we meet up everytime it snowed
we sat there with silence and listen to the flakes drop and watch them fall
sitting out on the hill in fall the day after you were gone
i listened to the breeze and i heard your voice
i saw your face the leaves falling down
i realized i was crying
i felt the tears run down my face
and i realized you were gone...............
| On September 30th 2007 19dudett92 Said : | |
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it's good, but i feel like it's not done. could you try to make it longer? |


