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Created: 02/27 2008
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Category: Love

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Don't Let Go

When I was a little girl, I wanted a pink bicycle

but I needed you to teach me how to ride

You just smiled your smile; you made it so worthwhile

when you spent that afternoon with me outside

But much to my surprise and with wide-open eyes

my laughter turned to tears from my frown

you hurried up to see the scrape upon my knee

I got when I fell off my bike and to the ground

And you held me in your arms

you made me feel so loved and so I said

Don't let go....Not just yet

Hold me close and don't forget

that I need you still, so if you will

please mommy, don't let go just yet

 

When I was a teenager, I fell so hard in love

and you, above them all, knew how I felt

All the times we walked... you listened as I talked

about this boy who could make my young heart melt

I had to face my fears... this boy, he brought me tears

and you said that I would move on from the pain

I admit I didn't believe and I felt so deceived

but in the end, you were right about the rain

Still, you held me in your arms

you made me feel so loved and so I said

Don't let go...Not just yet

Hold me close and don't forget

that I need you still , so if you will

please mom, don't let go just yet

Now that I am grown and I have children of my own

it broke my heart to learn you were dying

now I stay up late with so much on my plate

and mostly, I just find myself crying

Daddy called me so I'd know that tonight you were going home

and I rushed to be there by your side

You said, "Don't be alarmed. Just hold me in your arms

and please, sweet girl, try not to cry."

So I held you in my arms but I could not hide the tears

I just prayed you felt the love you made me feel through all these years

and so I said

Don't let go...Not just yet

Hold me close and don't forget

that I need you still so if you will

please mom, don't let go just yet

 

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On March 5th 2008 chickenbroth Said: 
chickenbroth Wow. This was extremely touching, on every level. I love the way that you described all the details, and the feeling in the piece is amazing. Honestly, I read and re-read this and it's so powerful. I just am having trouble thinking of a way to describe it. Just.. It's wonderful.
On February 29th 2008 borderyouthjoe Said: 
borderyouthjoe wonderful! i get to teach my daughter how to ride her bike this spring and this poem will be in my mind as i'm teaching!
On February 28th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: 
gonzo4201 Very nice, I will admit, it takes alot to get a tear in my eye, but I could definitely feel it, that was really good.
On February 27th 2008 locachoclate Said: 
locachoclate i loooooooooove this poem,............its like someone teaching a bird how to fly.........i realy lof it..you have a lot of true talent, pleez keep writeing poetrii