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Don't Let Go
When I was a little girl, I wanted a pink bicycle
but I needed you to teach me how to ride
You just smiled your smile; you made it so worthwhile
when you spent that afternoon with me outside
But much to my surprise and with wide-open eyes
my laughter turned to tears from my frown
you hurried up to see the scrape upon my knee
I got when I fell off my bike and to the ground
And you held me in your arms
you made me feel so loved and so I said
Don't let go....Not just yet
Hold me close and don't forget
that I need you still, so if you will
please mommy, don't let go just yet
When I was a teenager, I fell so hard in love
and you, above them all, knew how I felt
All the times we walked... you listened as I talked
about this boy who could make my young heart melt
I had to face my fears... this boy, he brought me tears
and you said that I would move on from the pain
I admit I didn't believe and I felt so deceived
but in the end, you were right about the rain
Still, you held me in your arms
you made me feel so loved and so I said
Don't let go...Not just yet
Hold me close and don't forget
that I need you still , so if you will
please mom, don't let go just yet
Now that I am grown and I have children of my own
it broke my heart to learn you were dying
now I stay up late with so much on my plate
and mostly, I just find myself crying
Daddy called me so I'd know that tonight you were going home
and I rushed to be there by your side
You said, "Don't be alarmed. Just hold me in your arms
and please, sweet girl, try not to cry."
So I held you in my arms but I could not hide the tears
I just prayed you felt the love you made me feel through all these years
and so I said
Don't let go...Not just yet
Hold me close and don't forget
that I need you still so if you will
please mom, don't let go just yet
| On March 5th 2008 chickenbroth Said: |
| On February 29th 2008 borderyouthjoe Said: |
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| wonderful! i get to teach my daughter how to ride her bike this spring and this poem will be in my mind as i'm teaching! |
| On February 28th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: |
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| Very nice, I will admit, it takes alot to get a tear in my eye, but I could definitely feel it, that was really good. |
| On February 27th 2008 locachoclate Said: |
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| i loooooooooove this poem,............its like someone teaching a bird how to fly.........i realy lof it..you have a lot of true talent, pleez keep writeing poetrii |


