Email:
Password:

Created By

Author's Comments

Sad.. =[ comments/rates are delightful.

Rate this Poem

+12

Your Eyes

Views (123) Pain Created on 10-30-07 Flag

I stare into the eyes of one who hurt me long ago

I listen to the words you speak and wonder if you know

Just how I feel and how I wonder if what you say is true

And then I look into your eyes and all I feel is you.

The emotions that come bounding out of shades of brown and green

I hated you and now I love--there is no in between

Just from one glimpse of all the love you harbor in your eyes

And I've gone down, under again, bombarded by your lies.

Why can't I stay away from you? I know I'll just get hurt

But love refuses to play fair, and this is what it's worth

My heart hardens each time you slam it down against the ground

I hate this pain, I hate this dark, I hate this plunging down. 

Each time I start to wizen up and leave these broken sighs

I glance up at you and with one look am lost inside your eyes.

Your captivating gaze is all it takes to bring me safely home

No matter how my brain says no, my heart is on its own

And even as I huddle within your warm and loving arm

I prepare myself for next time when you're sure to bring me harm.

 

Girls...this poem is for you. If you're in a relationship like this..{{I was once}}..you need to get out. It doesn't matter how perfect he seems. He isn't--he just likes to be in control. And he doesn't care what it takes to have that power. Loves ~ Jen

 

 

Please Login to post comments
On November 4th 2007 MelissaDA Said :
MelissaDA this is very well written. i love it. i have just gotten out of this sort of relationship, but the thing is, his lies still get to me even though we're broken up. i look into his eyes and i look at his sweet smile and i fall all over again..even though my head is screaming at me no, my heart invites him in once again, even though i know i will never truely get over him and i know that he will hurt me again..i admit, it is hard and i'm still dealing with it..but this is a very good poem. great job hun. ^_^
On October 31st 2007 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 this is very well written. it sucks because they make real men look bad. i'd never raise my hand to a woman...unless she was hell bent on mugging me in the street. I work hard for my dollars and i dont care if it's man, woman, or alien. ur gonna have to work to get my money. lol but seriously. amazing poem and ladies listen. i've know people in this kind of relationship and it is hard to let go because the good times are very good. but the bad is well u know.
On October 31st 2007 necrosiss Said :
necrosiss I love it.
On October 31st 2007 emily28793 Said :
emily28793 awsum poem