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YOU DONT' LISTEN

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Created on 4-16-08

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You don't listen anymore when I talk,

you turn my words around and cut me short,

How did we get this bad?

When did our communication end?

you are my lover , my friend,

I' am not your puppet you can turn on and off,

I have emotions running through me,

you are not my boss,

Why do you think about all the wrong thing's?

what I do is for you and me,

I have been trying to reach out to you,

but lately no one is home,

the tension the arguing, over nothing,

it has to end,

I refuse to live in your prison,

my needs are different from your's,

I' am me I' am unique

why don't you just listen to me,

your yelling and your hurtful words don't help,

you need to get a grip on your jealousy.

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written by Karen J. Jeffery

4/16/08

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On April 21st 2008 ArtificialRed Said :

	I'm not sure about the term 'jealously', but other than that I like this piece of work. It's has a nice flow and it really connects to any reader. Like for example, it makes me think of my mother and father. Again, nicely done. I'm voting for it.

On April 16th 2008 jeff2625 Said :

	PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK OF THIS POEM. THANK YOU. KAREN