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Just Her and ME
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Created on 6-29-07
Look as the moon and first star of night glimmer above us. They bring softness to the nite sky as we peer upon it with wondering eyes.. just her and me..
A gentle breeze brush brushes between us as I stand with her by the open water. We share our joyfulness through laughter and smiles.. just her and me..
Our reflection glinting from the waters glassy surface makes my heart beam with happiness. I draw her near.. losing her i fear.. just her and me..
The waves wash the fear away. Taking our love day by day. Us togather always and forever.. just her and me....
Please Login to post comments| On July 5th 2007 mazblondie Said : | |
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loved it.. |
| On July 1st 2007 adjkicksass Said : | |
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oh cute.
I wish I has something like that. |
| On July 1st 2007 2innocent4u Said : | |
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nice |
| On June 30th 2007 Tigga16 Said : | |
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This poem puts you in the place and time of the moment..great details I love this!!! |
| On June 29th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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this one created such a peaceful setting in my mind-nice job! |
| On June 29th 2007 gbrownstar Said : | |
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that was very good
i luv it :) |
| On June 29th 2007 Standardstaple Said : | |
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w00t! |
| On June 29th 2007 blah2blah Said : | |
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amazing! |
| On June 29th 2007 siverwing Said : | |
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I love it!!!!!!
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| On June 29th 2007 aj10023 Said : | |
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that was great...i luv it! |
| On June 29th 2007 Lauraloo143 Said : | |
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that sooo sweeet =] |
| On June 29th 2007 workingirl07 Said : | |
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beautiful! |
