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Alone

Views (3080) Haiku Created on 11-15-06 Flag

"Alone"
Alone She wrote,
A single note,
A desperate plea for help.

She began to cry,
She wondered why,
She felt the way she felt.

She prayed for the end,
A light beyond the bend,
But nothing ever came.

A seed began to grow,
But what she did not know,
What would be his name.

As small as he was,
He helped her because,
His love made her strong,

At the end of the day,
He never went away,
She held him all night long.

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On June 20th 2008 onelove6fs Said :
onelove6fs OMG thats wonderful! read mine?
On May 28th 2008 slorgsrkewl22 Said :
slorgsrkewl22 not really a haiku.... but i loved it all the same. don't worry about the catergory, keep writing like this! it's very nice. ^_^
On May 28th 2008 BBBear48 Said :
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your poem is beautiful
On April 27th 2008 savannahlynnk Said :
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to bad a haiku isnt that long it is supposed to be 3 lines and 5 sylables, then 7 and then 5!
On April 25th 2008 ljm5 Said :
ljm5 no many people know what a haiku is now a days, but it was still good
On April 15th 2008 LostSoul1121 Said :
LostSoul1121 I love this poem!!
On April 14th 2008 RAdNuDdOeM Said :
RAdNuDdOeM For the record, this is a LIMERICK, and a rather good one at that!

As for the rest of You, this is not an advice column. this is about the words not the one who penned them. That would make this a popularity contest, which is never a fair game.
On April 9th 2008 SomeGirl38 Said :
SomeGirl38 this is beautiful
On March 15th 2008 kesaia1029 Said :
kesaia1029 it isnt a haiku but still,beautiful!
On March 13th 2008 rememberme98 Said :
rememberme98 wow that was amazin
On March 9th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said :
XxbloodstainxX That was amazing
On March 6th 2008 olchii Said :
olchii i love it, hey chek out some of my pomes pleas?...:)
On February 29th 2008 fgggfx Said :
fgggfx too much self pity, thats wut it is
On February 14th 2008 cutekitti123 Said :
cutekitti123 I almost cried! haiku's are syllables of 5,7,then 5...well that is what avatar said...
On February 13th 2008 dualitywolf321 Said :
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great poem..? are you sure its haiku?
On February 4th 2008 Seranama Said :
Seranama pretty good I think..
On January 16th 2008 Whiterosesfall Said :
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sorry but thats kinda weird......but other than that it was good
On January 13th 2008 locachoclate Said :
locachoclate wow, thats the best poem herei really love it.check out my poems.................locachoclate
On January 6th 2008 skitzoangel Said :
skitzoangel aaawwwww!! thats cute*_*
On December 13th 2007 Babyboo911 Said :
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That was deep Very touching :)
On November 24th 2007 ouraygirl77 Said :
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i dont care that it is not a haiku. it was beautiful
On November 5th 2007 jaime10965 Said :
jaime10965 not a Haiku but it spoke to my heart.
On October 13th 2007 lampshadeking6 Said :
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5-7-5 dont chya know
On September 24th 2007 laundrybaskets Said :
laundrybaskets Not a Haiku
On August 29th 2007 1Yourstruly Said :
1Yourstruly I LOVE IT. WOW!