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inspired by the past...plz read!!!!!Rate this Poem
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scars
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Created on 7-2-08
These scars on my body
Theyre reminders of my past
Reminders of what ive done
Reminders of what ive lost
Friendships were broken
Lives were almost lost
Hearts were shattered
Thats what it cost
Scars are proof
That youve made it through
Something that couldve
Destroyed most
They show youre strong
But still breakable
Please Login to post comments| On July 3rd 2008 ALIESAM21 Said : | |
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wow this is great I loved this! Very good job! |
| On July 2nd 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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awesome.Loved it and it's very true |
| On July 2nd 2008 madmarcus Said : | |
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Like browneyes said I to think its neat how you turned a negative into a positive. I also like how you take something that others have expressed and made it your own...its a tricky thing for creative people to do. Nice Job. |
| On July 2nd 2008 browneyes33 Said : | |
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I love that you have turned something difficult into a positive. Good for you. |
| On July 2nd 2008 FireAngel420 Said : | |
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I love it it was beautiful |
