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idk i think i like this one.Rate this Poem
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run
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Created on 7-2-08
So run.
Just run.
Get away from this all.
Escape the pain you felt for so long.
Dont look back.
Dont turn around.
Forget this town.
You are better than them.
Better than us.
So please just go.
Leave this behind.
Follow your dreams.
They cant come true in this place.
And for once,
Be happy.
Please Login to post comments| On July 2nd 2008 JoyousBug Said : | |
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This reminds me of Jacob Black from the Twilight series. Beautiful. |
| On July 2nd 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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awwww, be happy and live life to the fullest........This is a happy poem and inspiring |
| On July 2nd 2008 madmarcus Said : | |
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I like this one. Im usually a harsh critic. This is what I would call a prose poem. Its flowing and hypnotic like a poem but its attention to iambic pentamiter and ryme scheme is minimal...good stuff. I like the content too. the pull factors that keep us in our communities are a real bitch! Most prose writers make great song writers! Check out writers on here such as Thugnastay and Numbbbboz/ JakeBozz. |
| On July 2nd 2008 libshitz197 Said : | |
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who is this aboutt?!!!?!? |
