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fading away
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Created on 4-14-08
i look around everybody's crying
this is also including me that i see
but people start to become happy
im still bleeding from the pain in me.
i trying to bring myself up
people put me back down
i tried to scream it out
but i didnt make a sound.
something about this life
doesnt seem right to me
problems are getting in the way
maybe it's my fault it cant see
im torn between a child
and a girl who hates today
but for at least for now.
eveythings fading away
Please Login to post comments| On April 14th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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great. |
| On April 14th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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This is different, but I love it....It was almost dreamlike to me as I read it-I could just see a girl blurred by fog or clouds or something, coming in and out of focus while the words kinda flashed out in front. Yeah...that may not make sense but it's a really good thing. I love it when simple words can create such vivid images in my mind. Nicely done~ |
