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this poem is for the girl i love

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MY LOVE

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I remember the day when I first saw you

Those are the days when the world is dark

But you made a great influence that gives my heart a mark

A mark that gives another life to my dying heart

That savors the passion of my love.

 

You are my gorgeous empress that governs my life

Your beauty is as precious as your crown is

Your white skin suites that red rose in your hand

Your smile is the life that flourish in my land

And your kiss is a breath-taking one that sends me to heaven.

 

You're the angel who lifts me up when life seems death

You're the goddess that brings me to the empyrean

You're the path when I feel lost in the midst of the jungle

You're the thorn that causes my heart to bleed

But no matter what, you're the girl that I always need.

 

I will show you the whole world if that's what you want

We will fly together with the mystical phoenix above the sky

With the cool zephyr of the evening that touches our skin

With the stars that glimmers around us

And with the moon that smiles to us, I hope that you feel my love which is more than a crush.

 

If we will be miles apart

I will conquer the sea to find you heart again

I will swim with the mermaids for me to see you again

With their song you will hear this heart of mine

Saying I LOVE YOU.

 

I may not be your man

But please let me hold your hand

For you're the only girl that I want to love

I don't care if you're hurting my heart

As long as I can see the empress of my heart.

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On January 31st 2008 Hobonoss Said :
Hobonoss aww that is soooo sweet thats such an awesome poem
On January 13th 2008 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 well writen. *J*
On January 11th 2008 blah2blah Said :
blah2blah thats amazingly written and that girl should definitely feel loved!
On January 10th 2008 zDashti Said :
zDashti you got my vote " thumb up"
On January 10th 2008 cardinalsfan91 Said :
my picture
cute
On January 10th 2008 13sweetcheeks Said :
13sweetcheeks aww so cute