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THE DAY YOU SAID GOODBYE

Views (94) Love Created on 12-29-07 Flag

Watching the glittering stars in the sky makes me feel good

Reminiscing those precious times of our life

But when I look the golden moon

I remember your smile in every afternoon

It just hard to forget those  times

Especially when you said goodbye to me

I rather take all the hurts that you've given me everyday

Than to say goodbye to me

Everyday is like a happy day

Though you're hurting me deep inside

For I can still feel the warmth of your embrace

The magic in your eyes

And the rainbow in your smile

Every single day that I can't see you is like death

So I beg you to stay for I know I will die without you

But then you still left me with broken hearts

Like a shattered glass on the floor

Waiting for you to put it back all together

But I guess I need to stop my feelings for you

For I know that you want the best for me

And I know that everytime you hurt me you're hurting yourself too

So thanks  for the memories that you've shared with me

I hope that you still remember me when you're blue

Because I always remember you in sad and good times in my life.

 

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On February 7th 2008 whitepoison Said :
whitepoison I can relate... =]
On January 9th 2008 Autumnr1 Said :
Autumnr1 this is really good it made me cry
On December 29th 2007 MoonlightXAK Said :
MoonlightXAK Jeje good poem