jake189

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WAITING FOR YOU

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Created on 12-24-07

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Once again I'm here in this lonely place

Sitting under this big tree just to see your face again

I can hear that sad sonata singing with the winds

I can feel the tiny droplets of the rain

But I don't care for I want to see you again

I can conquer any season just for you

Winter can't stop me from remembering you

Spring can't make me smile without you

Summer can't revive our lost memories

And even autumn can't wither my love for you

No storm can stop me from loving you

But I guess I'm so stupid

Stupid cause I've been waiting for a long time

Five years of waiting for the love that I know you can't give

But no matter how I will still love you until eternity

For I am a stupid person who loves a stupid person too

I will still wait for I know that you will come again

And I hope you will learn to love me to when taht day comes.

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On April 20th 2008 SecretTragedy Said :

	I like the way you brought in the seasons. For me it was relatable. I very much liked it. I look forward to reading more of your poems.

On January 9th 2008 maryann1990 Said :

	aww...hun if she dont love u its her on her you'll find someoner better i promise

On December 28th 2007 lisaljb Said :

	Indeed very sweet, great poem, keep it up! =)

On December 28th 2007 Wyldemiller Said :

	amazing how you can be swept away into the words and feel so close to someone that you can be in there dreams while they sleep nice work !!!

On December 28th 2007 morbidangel585 Said :

	aww very sweet..love how u put in all the seasons =]

On December 26th 2007 mistdarklight Said :

	i know the feeling... but even though my loves still there, even if she did love me now, i cnt accept it.. not from her

On December 25th 2007 lindsaymuth1 Said :

	It was really nice I can feel the pain