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i guess i need to forget my past

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GOODBYE

Views (289) Pain Created on 11-22-07 Flag

Whenever I close my eyes I always see you

Your face reminds me those sweetest times that we had

Your eyes reminds me the pain that we shared

Your smile reminds me those funny moments of us

And your hair reminds me of your beauty.

As I open my eyes tears keep falling down my eyes

I wanna shout as loud as I can

But then I can't

I don't know why!

But opne thing is for sure

I do really miss your presence

I miss your smile,

I miss your hug,

And I miss your kisses.

But then I need to let go of the past

And go forward for tomorrow's life

As I bid goobye

I hope that you will never think that I don't love you anymore

I just need to move on.

Always think that my love to you is incomparable.

I might find another person to love

But in my heart you're still the one.

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On June 27th 2008 DeathMetalPunk Said :
DeathMetalPunk Wow, amazing. You really have a gift for poety man.
On February 7th 2008 whitepoison Said :
whitepoison Wow. Really good.
On December 23rd 2007 Atir09 Said :
Atir09 ^________^
On December 22nd 2007 lindsaymuth1 Said :
lindsaymuth1 hey this really does mean alot to me I can relate to it with all of my heart I loved it
On December 5th 2007 jake189 Said :
jake189 once again guys thanks for the good comment... i'll be posting another one next week and it will be entitled COLD CHRISTMAS...
On November 26th 2007 Meowspots Said :
Meowspots very nice
On November 24th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 for someone so young you've managed to package ur feelings pretty good here. nice job.
On November 24th 2007 yorkiedude27 Said :
yorkiedude27 wow that was really fascinating your really talented
On November 24th 2007 jake189 Said :
jake189 oh thanks guys... i do appreciate your comments.. im not expecting that this poem would gonna be a big hit...
On November 24th 2007 loveXafterXall Said :
loveXafterXall Amazing! Your really talented!
On November 24th 2007 loveXafterXall Said :
loveXafterXall Amazing! Your really talented!
On November 23rd 2007 Darkenedsoul21 Said :
Darkenedsoul21 this is a great poem!
On November 23rd 2007 Reray1 Said :
Reray1 I liked this one better
On November 23rd 2007 jake189 Said :
jake189 thank you very much... i do appreciate your comments...
On November 22nd 2007 aly171994 Said :
aly171994 that is aweome i think it was relly from ur heart dat is wat counts i hope i can be ur friend bye
On November 22nd 2007 kinkyki Said :
my picture
i think this is reli sweet aww bless lol