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i guess i need to forget my pastRate this Poem
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A FRIEND OF MINE |
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FIRST LOVE |
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GOODBYE |
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ENDLESS LOVE |
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ON MY OWN |
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CEBU, MY HOMELAND |
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WAITING FOR YOU |
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THE DAY YOU SAID GOODBYE |
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MY LOVE |
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FOREVER LOVE |
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MY APHRODITE |
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THE JOURNEY |
GOODBYE
Whenever I close my eyes I always see you
Your face reminds me those sweetest times that we had
Your eyes reminds me the pain that we shared
Your smile reminds me those funny moments of us
And your hair reminds me of your beauty.
As I open my eyes tears keep falling down my eyes
I wanna shout as loud as I can
But then I can't
I don't know why!
But opne thing is for sure
I do really miss your presence
I miss your smile,
I miss your hug,
And I miss your kisses.
But then I need to let go of the past
And go forward for tomorrow's life
As I bid goobye
I hope that you will never think that I don't love you anymore
I just need to move on.
Always think that my love to you is incomparable.
I might find another person to love
But in my heart you're still the one.
| On June 27th 2008 DeathMetalPunk Said : | |
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Wow, amazing. You really have a gift for poety man. |
| On February 7th 2008 whitepoison Said : | |
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Wow. Really good. |
| On December 23rd 2007 Atir09 Said : | |
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^________^ |
| On December 22nd 2007 lindsaymuth1 Said : | |
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hey this really does mean alot to me I can relate to it with all of my heart I loved it |
| On December 5th 2007 jake189 Said : | |
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once again guys thanks for the good comment... i'll be posting another one next week and it will be entitled COLD CHRISTMAS... |
| On November 26th 2007 Meowspots Said : | |
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very nice |
| On November 24th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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for someone so young you've managed to package ur feelings pretty good here. nice job. |
| On November 24th 2007 yorkiedude27 Said : | |
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wow that was really fascinating your really talented |
| On November 24th 2007 jake189 Said : | |
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oh thanks guys... i do appreciate your comments.. im not expecting that this poem would gonna be a big hit... |
| On November 24th 2007 loveXafterXall Said : | |
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Amazing! Your really talented! |
| On November 24th 2007 loveXafterXall Said : | |
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Amazing! Your really talented! |
| On November 23rd 2007 Darkenedsoul21 Said : | |
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this is a great poem! |
| On November 23rd 2007 Reray1 Said : | |
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I liked this one better |
| On November 23rd 2007 jake189 Said : | |
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thank you very much... i do appreciate your comments... |
| On November 22nd 2007 aly171994 Said : | |
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that is aweome i think it was relly from ur heart dat is wat counts i hope i can be ur friend bye |
| On November 22nd 2007 kinkyki Said : | |
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i think this is reli sweet aww bless lol |


