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Night Is a Girl
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Created on 5-12-07
The nothingness of the black sky consumes me
and makes me while.
Warm shadows hide the scars.
There's a lust hidden in the night.
Why else would stars shine like a girl's eyes when they fall upon the next potential conquer?
Please Login to post comments| On May 12th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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I like your use of metaphor. Beautiful. |
| On May 12th 2007 deadpoet Said : | |
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another short one. |
