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a prelude to my poem "The Badge"

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Dress Me Up

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Dress me up

Put on the image you already have

There was no decision to make

I've already been decided in your mind

 

Dress me up

It's all just for show anyway

Shining and glowing for what you will

Nothing left for me to claim

 

Dress me up

Surely now is the time for resting

The box is ready and the dirt turned over

Now it's time for one last show

 

...dress me up, but all that, along with me, rots away

 

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On May 10th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 i lke how it maintains a basic theme of repetition!
On May 8th 2007 yoursweetsmile Said :
yoursweetsmile i love the way this is written. i can feel what you wrote, and its hard to write like that.
On May 8th 2007 spasm01 Said :
spasm01 i love it,ive been one a bit like it brewing in muh head,i kinda have someone along the same lines
On May 8th 2007 500nets Said :
500nets powerful, i got this image of a sad litle doll, it was nice and haunting, you should post your poems on your myspace bulletins, every now and then
On May 8th 2007 numba1chic Said :
numba1chic this poem is different from everything else iv'e read on here today and i really like its uniqueness.... awesome job