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Under the Giant Oak Tree
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Created on 3-28-07
Under the giant oak tree,
I sit and find me,
Wonder who I'm supposed to be
Under the giant oak tree.
Is there something more to life,
Of am I a pawn in a giant game?
Am I supposed to reach some amazing height?
Am I supposed to blend in, be the same?
I have questions,
But I'm lost without answers.
Is there fate, am I destined?
Should I put on your fancy airs?
Is this my soul about to be sold?
How much longer until I find me?
This is my story to be told
Under the giant oak tree.
I sit and find me,
Wonder who I'm supposed to be
Under the giant oak tree.
Is there something more to life,
Of am I a pawn in a giant game?
Am I supposed to reach some amazing height?
Am I supposed to blend in, be the same?
I have questions,
But I'm lost without answers.
Is there fate, am I destined?
Should I put on your fancy airs?
Is this my soul about to be sold?
How much longer until I find me?
This is my story to be told
Under the giant oak tree.
Please Login to post comments| On May 28th 2007 USMCMOSGrunt Said : | |
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Great poem on basicly how everyone questions themselves and some point! |
| On May 10th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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its really cool how you can create the imagery of this poem. |
| On April 14th 2007 glamourgore Said : | |
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I like the use of nature, like a backdrop for the questioning to happen. Spiritual without preaching. |
| On April 14th 2007 drowningnlove Said : | |
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i agree with katweim, i erally like it |
| On March 28th 2007 katweim Said : | |
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love the quesetioning |
