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The Now and the Never
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Created on 2-26-07
There is a calmness
when you reach the never mark,
when the now has ceased to be,
and the silence tends to fill the dark.
The air flows and goes by freely;
the burdens seem to melt away.
The sunrise holds on for just a bit longer,
thats when there exists the simpler day:
when you let now and never melt into nothing.
when you reach the never mark,
when the now has ceased to be,
and the silence tends to fill the dark.
The air flows and goes by freely;
the burdens seem to melt away.
The sunrise holds on for just a bit longer,
thats when there exists the simpler day:
when you let now and never melt into nothing.
Please Login to post comments| On June 8th 2008 ThisIsTheDay Said : | |
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I like the flow of this and it's just really nice in general..however, in L8, it should be "that's" instead of "thats". -Lozer™ =] |
| On March 30th 2007 lilbloodawni Said : | |
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Agreed with deadpoet - good flow. I like especially that the pace favourably compliments the topic. You've chosen your wording & your tempo well. |
| On March 29th 2007 Unperfection Said : | |
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that's cool. |
| On March 7th 2007 sincerelyichab Said : | |
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:) |
| On February 26th 2007 deadpoet Said : | |
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i like this one too... flows real nicely |
