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My Wandering Mind
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Created on 2-1-07
It's quiet here in this lonely place. My mind can only wander. I cannot change the memories of my heart's disgrace, and my mind can only wander, but can it be that I'm not meant to be forever living happily? Is this why I had to leave my haven, my home? My mind can only wander, but this place is too insanely quiet: filled with never spoken secret emotion lost and drowning in its unsung terror. Will my beloved angel come to me and rescue me from my wandering mind in such a terribly and frighteningly loudly quiet place?
I can only hope that I can have a place to call home.
Please Login to post comments| On May 10th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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Been there |
| On February 1st 2007 deadpoet Said : | |
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I like, I like, especially how you made "My mind can only wander" flow so nicely with it |
| On February 1st 2007 sincerelyichab Said : | |
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haha, I have an older one that's not up here...but goes along with your comments...it's called How Silence Is Deafening....kinda funny lol, slightly freaky cause it's almost of the same topic...I'll probably throw it up here just for kicks, very well written though, yours seems a bit mroe "epic" as in a greater build-up than mine so, therefore I like it :D |
