jac41190

I wish I could show this to him

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Created on 1-28-07

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Please tell me that you know me

Please tell me that you're true

Please tell me I'm all you see

Please tell me something new

Please take my and and hold on tight

Please take my life and care for it

Please take me in your arms tonight

Please take me and you won't regret

Please say that you love me

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On March 10th 2007 o0oSkatto0o Said :

	I like this a lot. Great style and meaning.

On March 1st 2007 Sandwich91 Said :

	wow, im assuming this is a valentines poem right?

On January 30th 2007 bordumb Said :

	you should show it to whoever "him" is

On January 28th 2007 hyang Said :

	sniff sniff.. such a short poem but it says so much.. I need to continue crying a river now..thnx for sharing.

On January 28th 2007 londonchick50 Said :

	Anyway, Great poem. Really loved it.

On January 28th 2007 londonchick50 Said :

	You can't, you would have to re-create it. They should really make it so you can edit it.

On January 28th 2007 jac41190 Said :

	damnit...thats supposed to me "Please take my hand and hold it tight"...does anyone know if i can edit my poems from here?