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Fading Away

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When you turn around and watch everything fade away,

Are you left with anything else to say?

Our closeness has faded,

And I'm feeling jaded.

I've given you my all,

But you sit and watch me fall.

I'm left wondering and waiting,

But even the memories are fading.

I never saw the end coming this way;

I'm questioning my every day,

But you have nothing left to say,

And I'll watch you fade away.

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On August 30th 2008 dropdeadsucka Said :
dropdeadsucka Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. P4P? LOL You should check out my poem 'Never Die'. I think you would rather enjoy it. Let me know. =) ...Love this poem..=)
On January 28th 2007 ralicia Said :
ralicia Soul destroying jerks, the worst you can do is to not let them have an affect on you. I used to literally laugh in the faces of people giving me shit and they had nowhere to go after that.
On January 27th 2007 batmanrocks92 Said :
batmanrocks92 It's really good.Keep writing poems your really good at it.
On January 26th 2007 rellcinko Said :
rellcinko i like this poem...
On January 21st 2007 jac41190 Said :
jac41190 yah, i get a lot of shit from a lot of people, but im trying to move past that right now
On January 21st 2007 NickCamp Said :
NickCamp i agree i love your style also it seems breaking down the people that break you down?
On January 18th 2007 TinyHeartShdow Said :
TinyHeartShdow Wow, this is very good.
On January 18th 2007 o0oSkatto0o Said :
o0oSkatto0o Nice nice.