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Just To Let You Know
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Created on 12-24-07
All the trouble I go
through just to let you know
(Just to let you know)
I care
And I can't say it with words
(You're impossible)
Don't give me that glare
(Are you really unaware?)
Would you listen to words
(in my own)
Honestly, perfectly
(You're impossible)
Truly, faultlessly,
(You're impossible)
Shut up
Wake up
You say to me
(what a mess up)
I can't catch up
(act up)
look up
(where you used to be)
Bring up
(the past is over now)
Tomorrow loves you more
Dressed up
Choked up
(At least you showed up)
The excitement build-up
(we'll just let that burn up)
It's all been saved up
(And for what?)
You say you give up
(Is it over now?)
Run up
(screw up)
Try again
(sneak up)
and speed up
(you're still the same to me)
All this hate is stored up
(you're still the same to me)
but we'll just let that burn up
(act up)
look up
(where you used to be)
Bring up
(the past is over now)
Tomorrow loves you more
(the past is everywhere)
It's just to let you know
I still care
You're impossible
(And I can't say it with words)
I wouldn't dare
You're impossible.
through just to let you know
(Just to let you know)
I care
And I can't say it with words
(You're impossible)
Don't give me that glare
(Are you really unaware?)
Would you listen to words
(in my own)
Honestly, perfectly
(You're impossible)
Truly, faultlessly,
(You're impossible)
Shut up
Wake up
You say to me
(what a mess up)
I can't catch up
(act up)
look up
(where you used to be)
Bring up
(the past is over now)
Tomorrow loves you more
Dressed up
Choked up
(At least you showed up)
The excitement build-up
(we'll just let that burn up)
It's all been saved up
(And for what?)
You say you give up
(Is it over now?)
Run up
(screw up)
Try again
(sneak up)
and speed up
(you're still the same to me)
All this hate is stored up
(you're still the same to me)
but we'll just let that burn up
(act up)
look up
(where you used to be)
Bring up
(the past is over now)
Tomorrow loves you more
(the past is everywhere)
It's just to let you know
I still care
You're impossible
(And I can't say it with words)
I wouldn't dare
You're impossible.
Please Login to post comments| On December 25th 2007 JoyousBug Said : | |
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I really like this. The repetition is really cool. |
| On December 24th 2007 Transience Said : | |
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I prefer longer lines, but this was good.
The constant short lines get aggravating after too long, but that may just be me.
Not as good as your last one, but it is still good. |
