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I Am Love's (complete?)
Can't you read it in my eyes
(the truth I'll never say)
Again I apologize
(I am Love's worst day)
Whispering in your ear
(in my imagination)
You won't cause a tear
(in my false creation)
I am Love's existence slain
I am the cause of her denial
I am Love's efforts done in vain
I am Love's perfect mistrial
(The truth is a lie in disguise)
Just like your smiles - let's not forget
(I am Love's Loser's Prize)
I am Love's favorite regret
Holding your hand in mine
(Our hearts are hurt and weary)
I am how to define
(Love's disproved theory)
I am Love's object of contempt
I am the one reason that she cries
I am her every failed attempt
I am that which she chooses to despise
I am her abandoned crown
I am worthless in her eyes
I am Love's hopes come crashing down
(I am all her said goodbyes)
(the truth I'll never say)
Again I apologize
(I am Love's worst day)
Whispering in your ear
(in my imagination)
You won't cause a tear
(in my false creation)
I am Love's existence slain
I am the cause of her denial
I am Love's efforts done in vain
I am Love's perfect mistrial
(The truth is a lie in disguise)
Just like your smiles - let's not forget
(I am Love's Loser's Prize)
I am Love's favorite regret
Holding your hand in mine
(Our hearts are hurt and weary)
I am how to define
(Love's disproved theory)
I am Love's object of contempt
I am the one reason that she cries
I am her every failed attempt
I am that which she chooses to despise
I am her abandoned crown
I am worthless in her eyes
I am Love's hopes come crashing down
(I am all her said goodbyes)
| On December 24th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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I love it. It's amazing. I felt like I was reading something about my own life. Great job. And I loved how you painted a picture so well with your words. |
| On December 24th 2007 nairad92 Said : | |
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... damn that is really really good |
| On December 24th 2007 Transience Said : | |
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This is one of the few good poems I've ever read on Testriffic.com.
Very nice. |


