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Created on 9-5-07
Shifting tides
cast the die
as each collides
we wonder why
each of us falls
mere dominoes
your skin crawls
see the shows
shows of red
shows of hate
shows widespread
shows the fate
we never had
what isn't lost
does it make you sad
the bridge we crossed
is too far behind
is this the end
you see we're all blind
or we all pretend
the difference between
justice and revenge
Please Login to post comments| On October 28th 2007 ESCAPEDFROMGOD Said : | |
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"Quite alright" said I. Understanding is not so important to me. It flows well and sounds good. |
| On September 10th 2007 HIMDarling612 Said : | |
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this is DEFFINITELY my favorite, it has wonderful flow, i lurve it... it's soooo good |
