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Permanent Reverie
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Created on 8-27-07
I think you know who you are
It's all fine as long as you are far
How long will this logic last
When will you finally realize
you've fallen too fast
Show me this world you idealize
When you hide from the crowds
wishing you were above the clouds
does the darkness pervade your dreams
Do tantalizing thoughts leak through
"Greetings to the outsider," they scream it seems
from here the choice is up to you
Is reclusiveness
your only bliss
Please let me in
I'll try to understand
Forgive yourself your own sin
and please just take my hand
Please Login to post comments| On September 10th 2007 HIMDarling612 Said : | |
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you could add more, but it sounds really good now
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| On August 27th 2007 j2asterisk Said : | |
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idk if i'm finished or not...do you? |
