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Hate Song For Her
Yeah they talk, they laugh and sneer
but if they heard what she can hear
They wouldn''t smile, wouldn't dare
Acting says (that) I don't care
And this isn't a love song
More of a hate song
Just like a story
where you might see
what life's like behind
those clenched fists, and teeth that grind
If they knew how much she cried
Would she still be seen outside?
And this isn't a biography
Wish it was a fantasy
All she can say
is, "I'm okay."
Is she an actress or a liar?
Repeating herself is such a tire
And this isn't a "you better beware,"
acting says (that) I don't care.
| On September 24th 2007 perdylilpyro Said : | |
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beautiful structure and repitition |
| On August 14th 2007 HIMDarling612 Said : | |
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i really do like this one... alot |


