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So Tell Me

Views (67) Envy Created on 8-4-07 Flag

"Hold on 'til your fingers bleed,"

So our thoughts know no other

Did you plan to grow the seed

or did you love just to smother?

 

"I'd hate to see such loveliness go to waste,"

So tell me, was it worth the crown?

Of your talent i've had a taste

No other like it's seen this town

 

"You don't really know me," 

But that's perfectly fine

We'd love to see

you choked on the vine

 

"The vine whose thorn scarred my heart," 

 and made them say we're so alike

The reality is we're world's apart

So tell me, have you reached your last strike?

 

"I hate you for leaving," 

the wind whispers in my ear

A life full of decieving

Has it really been a year?

 

So tell me, was it so hard to say?

and was it really true

I think of it everyday

how you said, "I love you." 

 

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On September 24th 2007 perdylilpyro Said :
perdylilpyro terrific. I truly enjoy when poems aren't explained; it leaves room for the mind to wander and for the reader to take on their own profound meaning.
On August 14th 2007 HIMDarling612 Said :
HIMDarling612 yep yep i like it!!! !!!
On August 4th 2007 MoOnZoMbIe Said :
MoOnZoMbIe perfect...absolutely perfect!