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So Tell Me
"Hold on 'til your fingers bleed,"
So our thoughts know no other
Did you plan to grow the seed
or did you love just to smother?
"I'd hate to see such loveliness go to waste,"
So tell me, was it worth the crown?
Of your talent i've had a taste
No other like it's seen this town
"You don't really know me,"
But that's perfectly fine
We'd love to see
you choked on the vine
"The vine whose thorn scarred my heart,"
and made them say we're so alike
The reality is we're world's apart
So tell me, have you reached your last strike?
"I hate you for leaving,"
the wind whispers in my ear
A life full of decieving
Has it really been a year?
So tell me, was it so hard to say?
and was it really true
I think of it everyday
how you said, "I love you."
| On September 24th 2007 perdylilpyro Said : | |
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terrific. I truly enjoy when poems aren't explained; it leaves room for the mind to wander and for the reader to take on their own profound meaning. |
| On August 14th 2007 HIMDarling612 Said : | |
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yep yep i like it!!! !!! |
| On August 4th 2007 MoOnZoMbIe Said : | |
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perfect...absolutely perfect! |


