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I was feeling really down one night.Rate this Poem
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Created:
01/16 2007
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Tragedy
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My Suicide Letter |
My Suicide Letter
The feelings in side are burning me if feelings are what you would call them.
Im not ok I tell everyone but they laugh in my face and tell me to die.
The darknees is here I feel the shadow over my soul and hope is gone.
Im never going to belng Im never going to be cared about so I know its over.
There is no one out there for me im all alone and its killing me its beacuse of all you.
Im lost and crying in side you wont help me because that would mean you cared.
My feelings burn and I know whats going to happen Im going to die.
Die because of you, all becuase of you are you happy now its all over.
Im not here anymore my life taken by my buring feelings and a small dagger.
Deep cuts down my arms its all your fault Im dead some more then others.
My blood is warm no longer lying in a pool around me its over just like it was ment to be.
All alone and in darkness all to make you happy I just wanted to make you happy.
Im not ok I tell everyone but they laugh in my face and tell me to die.
The darknees is here I feel the shadow over my soul and hope is gone.
Im never going to belng Im never going to be cared about so I know its over.
There is no one out there for me im all alone and its killing me its beacuse of all you.
Im lost and crying in side you wont help me because that would mean you cared.
My feelings burn and I know whats going to happen Im going to die.
Die because of you, all becuase of you are you happy now its all over.
Im not here anymore my life taken by my buring feelings and a small dagger.
Deep cuts down my arms its all your fault Im dead some more then others.
My blood is warm no longer lying in a pool around me its over just like it was ment to be.
All alone and in darkness all to make you happy I just wanted to make you happy.
| On August 14th 2008 xXXxjuicyxXxXX Said: |
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| this is extraodinary. a lot of people have these feelings but can's express them, you on the other hand, did and in an excellant fashion. |
| On June 25th 2008 blueyedshababe Said: |
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| I have definitely been to this point in my ife, thanks for being brave enough to share the feelings we all have at one point in time to the world. |
| On June 17th 2008 cori1275 Said: |
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| wow |
| On May 24th 2008 HannieJo Said: |
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| this is amazing. living and dieing for the happiness of others. you really have to experiance this to be able to write this well |
| On May 14th 2008 6615sweet Said: |
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| thankyou...thats all i can relly say...thankyou for showing others, how i feel, but mostly, how u feel...
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| On April 26th 2008 hayla120 Said: |
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| deep |
| On April 23rd 2008 inwattawni Said: |
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| i have felt like that before |
| On April 13th 2008 alycecrist Said: |
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| dude that was freakin' awesome! |
| On April 1st 2008 Jermie6363 Said: |
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| i love this poem |
| On March 21st 2008 winterdawn Said: |
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| All I can say is very deep. |
| On March 14th 2008 HalfPint162 Said: |
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| it's really sad... but i know how you feel about people not caring |
| On March 7th 2008 greenme14 Said: |
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| Omg...It was Amazing...
:]
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| On February 23rd 2008 hotpinkangel10 Said: |
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| I love this poem. It made me think of what could be and of how well I have it right this second. It was deep. Good job. |
| On January 30th 2008 jeff2625 Said: |
| On January 20th 2008 13AllAlone13 Said: |
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| wow..so deep.
i love it.. it reminds me of myself..
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| On January 4th 2008 rheabay Said: |
| On January 3rd 2008 Bexi93 Said: |
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| this is so deep and i feel like i culd just hug u cus it really made me think |
| On January 2nd 2008 asia9588 Said: |
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| What can I say it's deep |
| On December 29th 2007 Angel4eva007 Said: |
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| Wow this is really good. You put such depth and feeling into that it could almost make u want to cry out for that person |
| On December 28th 2007 DemonzR4eva Said: |
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| wow...what really can i say but woah...far out dude 0o :( > |
| On December 28th 2007 duh4ev Said: |
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| Death creates sadness but somehow you were right,
Killing your is faithful to your sin alright. |
| On December 23rd 2007 fallenXx420 Said: |
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| very nicely writen...i love it |
| On December 20th 2007 reaperchick983 Said: |
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| sounds EXACTLY like me right now.
absolutely wonderful |
| On December 19th 2007 ashleyy2007 Said: |
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| its great but 1234fukdaw0r1d is wrong someone in the world always cares |
| On December 14th 2007 N5607 Said: |
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| Good message... reminds me of myself... alot. |


