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a plea for my better half

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Views (258) Passion Created on 12-19-06 Flag

He just wants to tell you
exactly how he feels.
His heart is incomplete
and within sadness dwells.

He thought he could live without you,
he thought he could get along;
but time and time again,
he is always proven wrong.

He once stood tall and proud,
with his better half at his side.
He feels like he crawled up,
and inside he died.

For he is lost without you,
ever seeking love and joy.
He misses his old friend
and wants her to return.

He realized, "Mountains will be crossed,
in this journey we call life.
Only without his true friend,
will he endure strife."

When two friends have each other
there is never anything to fear,
as they go through life hand in hand,
they will always persevere.

I just want to tell you,
exactly how I feel.
My heart is incomplete
and inside, sadness dwells.

Even amidst
the day of despair.
Your one true friend
will always be there.

The joyous bond between two souls,
however challenged, is always bold.

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On June 27th 2007 trigunlover22 Said :
trigunlover22 wow i wish i could write as good as half as you
On June 23rd 2007 alexia66 Said :
alexia66 OMG, were do u get these thoughts lol. it was too true that i nearly cried, i know saddo but still its true to my heart. You better write some more soon :D, ur a good poet
On April 26th 2007 peterzshadow Said :
peterzshadow Hmm.. yes. I know about this. Well put.
On March 26th 2007 isrraelverde07 Said :
isrraelverde07 Damn that was good. You know as much as i try I can't seem to rhyme like that!
On January 8th 2007 lovemehateme92 Said :
lovemehateme92 wow this is wonderful i enjoyed it
On December 20th 2006 Maecherie Said :
Maecherie Wow very neato you did a good job =)