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A Dark Cloud Lingers
When I was new to this world,
a dark cloud lingered above my head.
'Twould foreshadow a life of misery and depression.
The dark cloud would haunt my life,
and would never go away.
There were some days of sunshine
but there were only a few.
The dark cloud would see more pain
and cease not to all my tears.
Many nights were spent crying
for hope that would never come.
Several nights I had pondered
if this was worth dealing with.
But somehow I remained strong
and learned how to endure.
Yet, the dark cloud still lingers
hanging just over my head.
Forever, shall it consume
my depressed heart and spirit
until the day that I am dead.
| On December 30th 2006 Scrappy954 Said : | |
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And sometimes, the wind blows very hard. |
| On December 19th 2006 Maecherie Said : | |
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If you think you life sucks, it will suck. So its kinda all in your head. But i like how the words flow together. =) |
| On December 19th 2006 TheChula Said : | |
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very dark. i hope this isn't really how you feel. life has it's ways of changing. and some changes rely on us. if you don't want that dark cloud that foreshadow on your life, you don't have to accept it. |
| On December 15th 2006 Dustman99 Said : | |
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Life is all about how you look at it. It is a game to me. I am just trying to win...lol.Beautifully written. |
| On December 14th 2006 WaxZombie Said : | |
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nice...love it man! |
| On December 14th 2006 sydiie Said : | |
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hmm, very dark and poetic ...sweet :) |


