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Created on 5-12-08
There was a sea who has a young man
the man had fallen over while aboard
hes on a journey to places unknown
when he suddenly fell over
no one even knew he was on board
now he is a fish
swimming all alone
except the coldness that creeps
in the middle of the water
he couldn't find anything but his feet
with no sence of direction
wild blue yonder ahead and no where to go
with fly like feelings
no one to share his blues
he faces his worst fears himself
no one to depend on but the one and only lord
is this how its going to end please tell me first lord
he couldn't find anything but his feet
with no sence of direction
~samantha corbett~
Please Login to post comments| On June 15th 2008 imtheonlyme4 Said : | |
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well we had to make a ryme scheme maching a songs lyrics i choose "me love" so i guess its ok im not that talented in writing |
| On June 15th 2008 Constantine445 Said : | |
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This Preatty good!!! |
