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Love is...
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Created on 3-25-07
"Love...Love is a simple but powerful word. But if you break it down, you will find that it is a bunch of word brought together to create the word Love. However, Love isn't just a "word"...Love isn't what you see...It is what you feel...Love is Trust, Love is Faith, Love is Strength and Will, Love is Pleasure, ...But with Love, ALWAYS comes PAIN...Like ingredients to a cake, they all must come together just right to make the cake complete. You must have Trust and Faith in your partner, Trust to prevent any insecurities...Faith, you must always believe in who you're will, if you don't believe in that person, then there is also no Trust... You must always have the Strength to be able to hold onto the person you're with when times get hard...This then brings Will, you must have the Will to be able to push on when times get hard, and there is a struggle, the Strength and Will to work through anything...TOGETHER... Pleasure, and that doesn't always have to mean having sex. Its the smaller things that count most, going out, and having a good time, anything like a movie, dinner, simply just holding hands, any of those examples can stir up any type of pleasure, other than sex...Now, with Pleasure, very likely will come Pain... Pain is self explanitory in this part, but it is common with the typical hardships of a relationship, such as arguements...Put with saying that, it means, Love comes with a price, and then thats where you will work your way through the process starting at part one... Just like the circle of life, theres always the good and the bad. Just put it like this, if there were no Pain, what Love would there be to gain?... That is how Love works, many people have certain ways of dealing with "their" Love, but if thought about, deeply, it will be realized that these are the factors that come into action and creating Love and the price it comes with...Just remember this though, Love is a feeling...Not a thought...Love is not what the eyes see. True Love is found only by the blindness of the heart...Follow your heart, and you will find your Love...and that, is what Love is..."
Zachary Brown 3/24/07
Further Notes-- This is all from my mind, and what i feel what Love is...many may not follow what i believe...but it makes sense doesnt it?...thats my Philosophical mind spilling out there....i hope you liked it...please comment, and thumb...thank you
Please Login to post comments| On June 26th 2008 blueyedshababe Said : | |
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my goodness, i'm a sucker for words and your words are what i have fallen in love with |
| On February 20th 2008 looknforthat1 Said : | |
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that is great.... i LOVE it
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| On February 15th 2008 13sweetcheeks Said : | |
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this is soo true...love it |
| On February 14th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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It was a good read and an interesting perspective. I don't agree that love is a feeling. I believe love is choice you make. Like until death do us part kind of thing. I made the "choice" to love you, even in times that I don't "feel" like, I like you. Know what I mean? JMO :) Peace |
| On February 14th 2008 numba1chic Said : | |
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so true, no other way of putting it, and amzingly written. good job |
| On February 9th 2008 kierawruck Said : | |
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2 thumbs up... |
| On February 5th 2008 LokiSeto Said : | |
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Dislike the circle of life comparision. That just means that it's an equal cycle that you go through and some could mistake that for: get a true love, enjoy and work on the love, lose the love, find another love etc. A better example may have been the Ying-Yang. Light and Dark. That is what you meant from your other examples and explainations. Anyways take a look at my story "Knowing the Heart" and that will deal with something you haven't dealt with. |
| On May 10th 2007 cheesyma Said : | |
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i wish it didnt have 2 cum with pain=( |
| On May 3rd 2007 marlana79 Said : | |
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I love this. I kinda think it sounds more like a story then a poem. But it's still very good. I think you are right on about what love means:) |
| On April 11th 2007 1Estrellita1 Said : | |
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once again i love ur poem nd its completely true!!! |
| On April 6th 2007 tigerbaby7644 Said : | |
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idc thts it not a poem..it still really good..i like |
| On March 30th 2007 imagitu95 Said : | |
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ok peeps....i never said it was a poem....theres just no place to put that...ok?! just get the message |
| On March 25th 2007 onaipwolf Said : | |
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Good job, even though this isn't a poem. :) |
| On March 25th 2007 monkeymonica Said : | |
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i really like it.. good job!!! |
| On March 25th 2007 Nelstead Said : | |
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thats not a poem. follows no poem style. poem... |
| On March 25th 2007 mrspina Said : | |
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i LOVE it!! i think its awsome! and it seems that you really know what your talking abou ^.^ |
| On March 25th 2007 bethbowser Said : | |
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it's great and true |
| On March 25th 2007 ikickurass89 Said : | |
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wow i like it a lot nice work. |
| On March 25th 2007 Sexigurrl Said : | |
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That's really good n not many men think like that! x |
| On March 25th 2007 imagitu95 Said : | |
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