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Judgement Day

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The first day of High School can really be tough

Especially if you're the new girl in school

Crowded Hall Ways

Hearing laughter, never knowing if they're laughing at you or at someone else.

Chitter Chatter here and there.

Pleople always in a stare.

The bell rings and class starts.

Roll call then quickly starts within the 1st minute.

"Ring" The lunch bell rings

When You enter the cafeteria, all you smell is the weird stench of mystery meat.

Something that you should never eat.

When you look to find a spot you feel like you don't want to eat anymore.

As the last bell rings

You can't wait to get out

You have finally survived Judgement Day.

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On March 16th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I went through all my schooling in the same little town I grew up in so I never had to have an experience of not knowing anyone other than in Kindergarden. This was good at letting me know what that must have felt like. Good write.
On October 24th 2007 kgrf101 Said :
kgrf101 This sounds a lot like what happened to me just recently!! WoW! This is a catchy poem!! Love it!!