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what is love,why cant i have it?

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once you made me smile

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i still love him

i love him more than i ever did.

it kills me to see him move on so fast

knowing that i cant do the same

i miss the way he made me smile

i miss the way he made my laugh

now i cry just as much as i used to smile.

i want to hold him

to take him in my arms

my love, why couldnt we be?

why couldnt you love me, like i loved you?

you hurt me so many time

and not one time did i hurt you.

te amo, te amo te amo!

te extrano, te extrano, te extrano!

i guess we were never meant to be.

i guess its true then, amor de lejos es de pendejos?

far away romances never last

and now i can not smile like i used to.

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On June 20th 2008 ReneakaKC Said :
ReneakaKC omg!!! The twist of 2 lenguages to express a feeling Makes this a remarkable piece. Spanish is among the fewest lenguages that are ROMANTIC. I love "TE AMO, TE AMO, TE AMO TE EXTRAÑO, TE EXTRAÑO, TE EXTRAÑO" I'm starting to write in spanish But it's kinda hard. I uploaded to another site 'Cause I'm not sure how many people here can read and fully understand spanish. GREAT JOB. dare I say EXCELLENCE HAS BEEN REACHED!!! Trully inspiring