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what is love,why cant i have it?Rate this Poem
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once you made me smile
i still love him
i love him more than i ever did.
it kills me to see him move on so fast
knowing that i cant do the same
i miss the way he made me smile
i miss the way he made my laugh
now i cry just as much as i used to smile.
i want to hold him
to take him in my arms
my love, why couldnt we be?
why couldnt you love me, like i loved you?
you hurt me so many time
and not one time did i hurt you.
te amo, te amo te amo!
te extrano, te extrano, te extrano!
i guess we were never meant to be.
i guess its true then, amor de lejos es de pendejos?
far away romances never last
and now i can not smile like i used to.
| On June 20th 2008 ReneakaKC Said : | |
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omg!!!
The twist of 2 lenguages to express a feeling
Makes this a remarkable piece. Spanish is among the fewest lenguages that are ROMANTIC. I love
"TE AMO, TE AMO, TE AMO
TE EXTRAÑO, TE EXTRAÑO, TE EXTRAÑO"
I'm starting to write in spanish
But it's kinda hard. I uploaded to another site
'Cause I'm not sure how many people here can read
and fully understand spanish.
GREAT JOB. dare I say EXCELLENCE HAS BEEN REACHED!!!
Trully inspiring |


