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Created on 3-14-08
Im Trapped
I Need To Breath'
I Can not hold on much longer
Its like hell here
satans children all around me
I Need to get to my escape
My Escape
The City Of Angels
The City where anything can happen
I can love here.
And I feel love back
This is my sefety zone
My life
My air
Without it I would die
Onnly for a few hours, i can saver the moments
Those hours go by so quickly
Its like time just goes bye
There are times that i feel like anything can happen
This is my sanity
I Just need my escape
Please Login to post comments| On March 21st 2008 CSLimeWriter Said : | |
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Very nicely written |
| On March 19th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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This is very good too :) |
| On March 14th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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I really like this. Nice word choice. Keep up the great work! :) |
| On March 14th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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This flowed effortlessly! Very nice! |
