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I wrote this for my 1st Love

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Can I Keep You?

Can I Keep You?

Views (261) Love Created on 4-12-07 Flag

He's her every thing he is the apple of her eye

He is the addictive drug that gets her high

And this weird happy butterfly feeling she seems get

When he walks into a room and also her palms start to sweat

 

She get lost in his deep dark eyes

He's like her angel in disguise

When she is around him it feels completely surreal

Its almost like she is a dreaming but better it's real

 

When I first saw him I thought yeah, he looks fine

But in my heart I wanted him to be mine

Later I found me staring in his eyes

It made me stop to think and realize

I think its true falling in love at first sight

In my mind I was hoping to be right

 

You know how that saying goes a little thing can go a long way

Well Its amazing how the little things he does just makes my day

For example when he looks at me and smiles my face turns red

Or feeling that warm safe caring sensation when he kiss my head

There is always that one person that has your heart

And you where that special person from the start

When you kiss me everything seems disapear

From that moment its just me and you here

And every care in the world seems to float away

So when i kiss you the good part of me seems to stay

 

 

Sweetie your the best next to nothing

Your my Sunshine in bad weather

So in this poem i wanted to ask you something

If I tell you I love you can I keep you forever?

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On December 11th 2007 mizzthang17 Said :
mizzthang17 very good i love it
On August 14th 2007 nwirotod Said :
nwirotod WOW, its very good. I love it a lot
On July 4th 2007 jwoody1980 Said :
my picture
very good
On May 10th 2007 NightLifeGurl Said :
NightLifeGurl wow so sweet =]
On April 26th 2007 Jazzman99 Said :
Jazzman99 WOW this is so good made me feel so emotinol god your a good writer please email me i know it sounds sily but you sound like some one i would get on with.
On April 23rd 2007 Invertigo98 Said :
Invertigo98 so nice. reminds me of being alot younger. lol g-job!
On April 19th 2007 leegonzalez Said :
leegonzalez wow! i really really really like this! am going to add it to my favorites! you got skill. let me know when you post more...
On April 16th 2007 DrOfAllThings Said :
DrOfAllThings thats real good.
On April 14th 2007 lovepoet191 Said :
lovepoet191 its rele sweet...i like it
On April 12th 2007 thenewguy8t88 Said :
thenewguy8t88 aww this is really sweet i like it