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I wrote this for my 1st LoveRate this Poem
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Can I Keep You? |
Can I Keep You?
He's her every thing he is the apple of her eye
He is the addictive drug that gets her high
And this weird happy butterfly feeling she seems get
When he walks into a room and also her palms start to sweat
She get lost in his deep dark eyes
He's like her angel in disguise
When she is around him it feels completely surreal
Its almost like she is a dreaming but better it's real
When I first saw him I thought yeah, he looks fine
But in my heart I wanted him to be mine
Later I found me staring in his eyes
It made me stop to think and realize
I think its true falling in love at first sight
In my mind I was hoping to be right
You know how that saying goes a little thing can go a long way
Well Its amazing how the little things he does just makes my day
For example when he looks at me and smiles my face turns red
Or feeling that warm safe caring sensation when he kiss my head
There is always that one person that has your heart
And you where that special person from the start
When you kiss me everything seems disapear
From that moment its just me and you here
And every care in the world seems to float away
So when i kiss you the good part of me seems to stay
Sweetie your the best next to nothing
Your my Sunshine in bad weather
So in this poem i wanted to ask you something
If I tell you I love you can I keep you forever?
| On December 11th 2007 mizzthang17 Said : | |
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very good i love it |
| On August 14th 2007 nwirotod Said : | |
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WOW, its very good. I love it a lot |
| On July 4th 2007 jwoody1980 Said : | |
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very good
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| On May 10th 2007 NightLifeGurl Said : | |
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wow so sweet =] |
| On April 26th 2007 Jazzman99 Said : | |
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WOW
this is so good made me feel so emotinol
god your a good writer please email me i know it sounds sily but you sound like some one i would get on with. |
| On April 23rd 2007 Invertigo98 Said : | |
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so nice. reminds me of being alot younger. lol g-job! |
| On April 19th 2007 leegonzalez Said : | |
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wow! i really really really like this! am going to add it to my favorites! you got skill. let me know when you post more... |
| On April 16th 2007 DrOfAllThings Said : | |
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thats real good. |
| On April 14th 2007 lovepoet191 Said : | |
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its rele sweet...i like it |
| On April 12th 2007 thenewguy8t88 Said : | |
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aww this is really sweet i like it |


