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nothing is what it seems.....Rate this Poem
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Public Faces
So many public faces
are what I see
It's really hard to tell
which one's really me
The attitudes all different
yet outward appearance the same
It's getting very confusing
Is this just some sick game?
Tying on a facade for this masquerade
before we must make haste
to greet anew
with a new face
For the next masked character
putting on a show
a grand, spectacular act
so no one will know
What happens
when they turn their back
And the plastic mask
goes slack
Because nothing,
even with its attractive gleam
or shining smile
--is ever what it seems
| On July 2nd 2008 Robert93635 Said : | |
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very nice. you have talent |
| On June 22nd 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Dang That is preety good! Not your best? I think it's good! I love how it makes you look at life. The people in it can be fake or true. You can hide behind a mask or a smile. But your still hiding. |
| On June 22nd 2008 Zikizue123 Said : | |
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It's pretty amazing for not being your best. Lol |
| On June 22nd 2008 flutytute Said : | |
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Oh, phooey on you! :D It's still wonderful! |
| On June 22nd 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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Your best or not, it was still good work. I liked it. |
| On June 22nd 2008 McRrOxMySoX8 Said : | |
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I like this one a lot. I sometimes think the same thing. |
| On June 22nd 2008 hpfan731 Said : | |
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not my best.... |


