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Darkness

Views (93) Fear Created on 1-21-08 Flag

I know i should be grateful

But its hard for me to be

When the shadow in the corner

Is creeping closer to me

My hand begins to shiver

And my nose begins to bleed

I sink to the cold floor

As I fall down on my knees

And i scream to anyone

Who may be listening to me

To save me from the darkness

That's overwhelming me

It floods my lungs and blinds my eyes

So I can no longer be

The person you remember me as

For the darkness has changed me.

 

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On March 19th 2008 Jermie6363 Said :
Jermie6363 very very sweet
On March 14th 2008 sliversideup Said :
sliversideup wow love this it has such a compelling rythem to it very nice work :)
On March 14th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord Woah!! that was Bruilliant!!
On March 13th 2008 California1516 Said :
California1516 WOAH intense..i like it alot..u have a nice smooth flow to all of ur poems..and nothing seems forced..
On March 13th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 definitely feelin the darkness, Loved It!!
On March 12th 2008 RalRasper Said :
RalRasper The darkness really can change someone
On January 24th 2008 brosbestfrien1 Said :
brosbestfrien1 love it
On January 22nd 2008 mellamoo01 Said :
mellamoo01 this is good, i really like ur style of writing its really good i love the use of imagry in this like the way u discribed things its good
On January 22nd 2008 Autumnr1 Said :
Autumnr1 oh no you went to the dark side. oh i'm sorry thats a joke we have on campus. seriously you did a great job.
On January 22nd 2008 Wyldemiller Said :
Wyldemiller Direct and it connects the reader to the material very well. Very nice work :)
On January 21st 2008 individulsong Said :
individulsong This is brilliant. I've felt this way before, so when someone can relate, you know you've got a good poem. Kudos.