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When the sound of rain becomes deathly.

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Into the woods,

Trying to escape,

Tears in her eyes,

Running, running.

 

She fell.

 

The arms of the thorn bush

Consumed her.

 

Behind an old oak,

She crawled,

Bruised,

Bloody.

 

Footsteps

Coming.

 

It was him

Looking for her.

 

The footsteps drew

Nearer.

 

Her heart raced

Faster.

 

The leaves rustled.

 

The steps stopped on the other side

Of the tree,

Paused,

Continued further.

 

She relinquished her hiding spot,

And ran,

Deeper,

Further,

Into the woods.

 

The wind blew,

As if to warn her,

Of his presence.

 

Thunder crashed.

 

Lightning flashed,

Setting a tree,

Inches from her,

Ablaze.

 

She ran,

Past the fallen branches.

 

Footsteps,

Behind her.

 

The leaves rustled under his feet,

Telling her to give up,

To turn around.

 

She ran between two bushes,

And knew she was doomed,

Fore behind the bushes,

Was emptiness.

 

A spot neglected by God,

Where everything was dead.

 

She saw a tombstone,

And walked toward it.

 

She was wrong.

 

It was not a stone,

But a mere piece of pine,

 With a name:

Sandra Colt.

 

Her mother,

Whom had befallen the same fate.

 

She turned around,

To face the man whom had killed

Her mother,

And was going to kill

Her.

 

Tears streaming down her face,

She knelt before him,

As if to surrender.

 

A scream.

 

A gunshot.

 

The footsteps retreated.

 

The fire stopped popping.

 

A curtain of silence,

Separating her body and the forest.

 

One sound could be heard.

 

The sound remained forever.

 

The pitter-pattering, deathly sound of,

The rain.

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On October 14th 2007 oceanbluebook Said :
oceanbluebook that was really good..keep it up..
On October 7th 2007 darkemokid1415 Said :
darkemokid1415 great job. It was amazing so deep, I loved it so much. I couldnt stop reading it.
On October 6th 2007 crashedrainbow Said :
my picture
It's amazing. I love it.
On October 6th 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic Wow, pretty creative! I've got goosebumps now, just so you know!...Awesome work!
On October 6th 2007 mandamotrin723 Said :
mandamotrin723 oh wow...this is so good...so depressing but it really got me interested! i love this...