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Valley of still
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Created on 10-4-07
Poem Title: The Valley Of Still
Tis so dry and all alone
Noone to comfort,starving,and alone.
No wind in the swaying of the trees
Just a discomfort in my life's seas.
my breath has shortened,my heart so slow
My existence stifled, no where to grow
Silence in the distance but a rage within
Trying to hold on but wishing to give in
Longing for the answer within this time spent
No anwer to my questions, not even yet
A mirage in the distance distracts my view
My nights of sleep very few
My cup so empty wishing for a fill
Yet I obey, I shall stand still.
Tis so dry and all alone
Noone to comfort,starving,and alone.
No wind in the swaying of the trees
Just a discomfort in my life's seas.
my breath has shortened,my heart so slow
My existence stifled, no where to grow
Silence in the distance but a rage within
Trying to hold on but wishing to give in
Longing for the answer within this time spent
No anwer to my questions, not even yet
A mirage in the distance distracts my view
My nights of sleep very few
My cup so empty wishing for a fill
Yet I obey, I shall stand still.
Please Login to post comments| On October 29th 2007 countryfreak13 Said : | |
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| On October 5th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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once again you have left me speechless! |
