haylesrox

ok this is my first real poem

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Life is like a Rose

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Created on 9-20-07

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Life is like a rose.

The rose itself represents all the great things that happen in the world

whilst

The thorns represent all the terrible things in life.

Now we all know that everything in the world is balanced out

Good things against Bad.

Happy against Sad

and even

Life against Death.

Its all a part of life.

Don't waste ur life by taking precautions all ur life

Take risks wen u know u shuld

Hav a little fun every once in a while

Because wen u die u wanna die happy,

u don't wanna die a miserable wreck.

So next time ur not sure if u wanna do it or not, give it a go, and dont wimp out

(this is my first poem, if its goo pleez leave me a comment saying so, if its crap leave me a comment saying that.)

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On November 6th 2007 dsouthernlily Said :

	I liked it!! Keeping writing! :)

On September 20th 2007 haylesrox Said :

	take this in mind because you will never know when its ur time to pass away until it actually happens

On September 20th 2007 qosdfyjvwefayv Said :

	AWESOME HALEZ FUKIN AWESOME AN IM NOT JUS SAYIN DAT CUZ U MA FRIEND IM SAYIN IT CUZ IT DEEP WAY DEEP AN TRUE LUVIN IT YA NO I WAZ JUS LISTNING TO A SONG BY GEORGE BOUT SHIT LIKE THAT AN IT MADE ME CRY XD LOL NA BUT REALLI GUD